Cyranos [writer] 7/29/12

Assigned: 7/29/2012
I wanted to start handing out assignments earlier but a few issues prevented me from doing that.

In Chaotic Titania mighty Titans battle the inhabitants of the world for rule and power. The titans are similar to the titans of mythology and the people of the world can and some do have super or beyond human abilities. Your assignment is to write a new and original prologue for the game. If you need any additional info please let me know.

I need some more guidelines than this, if you would be so kind.

I'd like to have a rough picture of what you want, as well as how long you want it to be and what kind of style you want.

You need some guidelines. okay.

*Has to be able to translate to game intro and game play.
*Feel free to use your creativeness and inspiration
*Must be long enough to turn into a 30 second to three min game introduction
*Can be a storyboard, outline, or short story form.
*Anime style story welcome

I've rewritten the prologue from the game topic. I will work on compiling a game intro version shortly.

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While that is all great I am about to break apart the Chaotic Titania game away from what I originally evolved it from. It used to be called Days of Enchantment and that was the intro story for it. I was looking for an original story that I could attach to Chaotic Titania and take back the stuff from Days because I am about to revive it in the original idea as Days of Enchantment.

I also Agree that these need to be renamed since these names were made up in 1991 and have never been changed.
* Enchantasia or Enchantsnia
*Yutobians or Utobians meaning from Utopia

but about your rewrite.
*I see some errors with your grammar and or spelling and the word beings has a space between the g and s in your document.
*A lot of fragments. partial sentences and partial paragraphs.
*Star Eater appears out of nowhere and where is the "renegades' leader at? He did have a name.
*A little hard to read. The partial ideas and setup is all most what I had. Not too much difference between the "Days Story" and yours.

What I am looking for
*A more original story for Chaotic Titania
*better structure in your writing and spell checking and proof reading wouldn't hurt.

None of this is meant to be personal or anything just making a few points.

Okay, I wasn't clear that you wanted me to rewrite the story completely. I'll work on it now.

There isn't, however, according to both my style manual and my spellchecker, a single spelling or grammar error. If you'd like to point them out, feel free.

Ok, here is a new proposal for CHAOTIC TITANIA:

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